The partial sword looks odd here...u could add some light there...on sword and on hands also..and the white signature is brightest colour in this artwork...pls dont give this much of importance of ur signature..because of the black bg there is a heavy contarst generated. u could add some deep tones on the face and on the body too.
keep it up

Fellow Dutchman,
Practice, practice, practice. The basics are ok, but it's clear that you don't own the anatomic and structural knowledge you need yet. Look at others work and ask yourself: Hoe hebben ze dat gedaan?

I like the sword, I think it is a good idea But i have to agree on the anatomy. Keep tryin

I like this one best out of all your works so far, keep up the practice!